Discovery Draft..
By raquelcantu07
Discovery Draft plus progress report..ENJOY!
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April 24, 2008 at 6:46 pm
Notes for Peer’s Oral Response
Essay # 3
Writer : Raquel Peer Respondent: Sara
Instructions: Listen to the essay carefully. Take at least two minutes after the reading to complete the following notes, and then share your reactions orally with the writer. Submit the completed form to your teacher at the end of the Peer Response activity.
(+) What works? (praise)
Really good introduction
Good description of the food
Description of the service
Talk about the prices
(-) What Doesn’t (polish)
Although it is informative it too personal
(?) Questions?
Is there anyway you can make the essay a little less personal and more to the point
April 24, 2008 at 6:47 pm
Notes for Peer’s Oral Response
Essay # __3__
Writer ________Natoya Ramkumar_____ Peer Respondent ______Raquel______
Instructions: Listen to the essay carefully. Take at least two minutes after the reading to complete the following notes, and then share your reactions orally with the writer. Submit the completed form to your teacher at the end of the Peer Response activity.
(+) What works? (praise)
Nice introduction- gets my attention
Nice comparisons to other sushi restaurants
Includes different examples of there foods – tastes and presentation details
Nice touch with including the reasonable prices
(-) What Doesn’t (polish)
A little to much personal detail.
(?) Questions?